Travelling...That gives pleasure even when I think it. I am sure that everyone on the world loves travelling, exploring new cultures, meeting new people. Needless to say, I am one of them. If I were given a chance to go to anywhere for two weeks, I would be confused. But my answer would be Italia, the city of lovers. My reasons for it are very clear: my love to Italia, my education of Italian, the beauty of the country and their rise with love.
First of all, I love Italia because it is a typical Mediterranean county so it is hot and has sea-side.I am sure that I will enjoy the journey there. There are a lot of historical and natural pieces. In Florance there are two arenas named Duomo and Signoria.As far as I heard, both of them have meanings. And I want to solve these meanings.To say the truth, what I wonder the most is Rome. It is capital of Italia. Rome has beauty that is peculiar to itself.
Secondly, I am a student in Metu and I am taking Italian course as the second language. My teacher tells us that she visited Italia and had a wonderful time there.This really makes me excited and I want to go there. She has us listen Italian songs and they are, I think, wonderful. My other reason to go there is my goal to improve my Italian level. I belive that a foreign language is learned the best in the place where it is spoken as a native language.
In addition to these, when it is said ‘Italia’, what comes to mind is pizza and makoroni. Italia is famous for its pizza. They are specialized in making pizza and I believe that nobody can compete with them. Moreover their makaroni is also perfect. They cook it a bit different from us, they do not boil it as much as we do. And they say this in their language as ‘al dente’namely a bit stiff.
Love and Italia…This link pulls my attention, too. Italian men and women are born with a sign in their heart, as I heard.This maybe real because guitar, river, flowers, Venice…
I think they are men or women of love.
To sum up, Italia has wonderful things to see. It is necessary to taste its pizza and makaroni. Moreover, I should develop my Italian. But I am not sure that only two weeks are enough. However, I want to be lost in the streets of Italia…
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Hi Begüm,
YanıtlaSilI think that introduction part in your essay is very well organized and I can see the thesis statement easily.Also your topic sentences are clear and support your thesis statement.There is well organization between the topic sentences and each body paragraph and conclusion part summarizes your essay as it should be. Finally I agree with you that Italia is really wonderful country..
If I were given a chance to visit a foreign country I want, my choice would be certainly Egypt. My reasons for it are that: its mysterious pyramids, my love for archeology and the films related to it, and my wonder about Cairo.
YanıtlaSilIt will be better if you combine these two sentences and make it your thesis statement.