4 Mart 2009 Çarşamba
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1)Introduction- Thesis Statement: Every person has his/her own features.As we look at them outside,we only see some of them.The others are hidden in their owners.I,myself,have some features that everybody doesn’t know.These are my addiction to my mobile phone,walking without stepping on the lines and considering it as a big problem when I can not remember something that I knew before.
Body Paragraph #1:
Topic Sentence: I am so addicted to my cell-phone that I am always with it during the day.
A)When I sleep,I put it under my pillow;so that I can look at it and control if there is any missing call or message.
B)During the day,I always look at it unconciously no matter where I am or what time is.
C)I have free-message so I feel that I have to finish it so I even send messages to my room mates.
II. Body Paragraph #2:
Topic Sentence:I always pay attention to walk without stepping on the lines.It really disturbs me.
A)When I am walking on the street,I don’t step lines.I jump when ı see line.
B)Sometimes I realize that I am counting the number of stones on the road.
III. Body Paragraph #3:
Topic Sentence: If I do not remember something,I get mad unless I find what it is.It really makes me angry.I can not focus on what I do.
A)I consider a lot when I can not take into mind the name of an actor who is acting now in a movie and acted in an else movie before.
B)I think I have to remember everything in detail;I don not forget easily my friends birthday
C)I have problem with songs.When I hear a part of it,I have to go on it and if I do not remember the rest of it,I get mad.
Conclusion: Sometimes I can not dream how diffrent I am.But everybody has some interesting features.
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