19 Nisan 2009 Pazar
technology
Although internet has very beneficial advantages such as reaching information whenever and wherever, giving chance to works and shopping online, when we look at it on the other hand it possesses disadvantages such as seperating us from real life,giving harm to our eyes and boring us only by sitting.
Kaydol:
Kayıt Yorumları (Atom)
.jpg)
it is a good thesis statement.it is clear and your side is clear.it gives good idea about topic sentences and supporting ideas.well done.
YanıtlaSil