21 Nisan 2009 Salı

the bad effects of internet

Today internet has reached its fastest speed providing people with everything that will come to your mind or not. It really makes the life easy for us but it is necessary to be able to look at it on the other hands. Although it has several advantages such as reaching the information whenever or whereever you want, giving chance to works and shopping online, when we look at it on the other hand it possesses disadvantages such as seperating us from real life,giving harm to our eyes and boring us only by sitting.

First of all, you lose yourself in online world and can forget teh real life. There are a lot of examples for this. A lot of children forget the time in the internet cafes only by sitting in front of computer. They do not understand the real life and sometimes they see it like a computer game. Apart from children, the adults, too, may cut the connects between the real life and online life.
They sometimes can not communicate with people normally because of internet.

secondly, to use internet excessively you have to look at the screen directly. Can you imagine what the harms of it may be. You will face a lot of eye problems such as not exactly seeing or little seeing. Do not forget eye is one of the most important organs of us.

Moreover, I think it is very boring to sit in front of a computer for hours only for internet.It really makes people asocial. While there is wonderful wheather outside, you sit infront of it and spend your time in vain. You forget your ''REAL WORLD FRIENDS ''.That is why I said it makes people bored.

Finally, in addition to the advantages of internet, There are harms, too, such as seperatins us from real life, giving harm to our eyes and boring us by making us sit in front of computer for hours. As lond as you use the internet well enough , you do not face these problems. I have to say that it is not important to having internet but to use it properly.

2 yorum:

  1. hi begum;
    First of all I want to say that I agree with you on the issue of using internet too much and its bad effects. Then I can say that I like your essay. Your body paragraphs are in hormony with your thesis statement so it is a good work:)

    YanıtlaSil
  2. hi begüm ı like your essay your thesis statment and topic sentences are clear enough.good job..:)

    YanıtlaSil