Television has been a part of our life for many years. Although there are both those who are opposed to it and those who support it, most people spend their some time watching TV. I think this is a pity because it has harm more than good, it has lots of bad sides. And also, I do not think that today TVs teach children something, on the contrary, it has lots of bad effects on children.
If we want to mention its harms, we can say lots of things about this. For instance; there are several horror films or series on TV, children watch them, learn something affecting them in a bad way during their development and they apply these things such as trying to make magic, flying, shutting, crying all the time when their parents do not do what they wish, etc. I think all these things are harmful for children. Instead of learning and living real life, they are affected from TV and they do not see the reality. If there would teaching programms or useful news on TV for children. TV could be useful for them, but unfortunately, it is not.
Apart from its harms for children, it has also the same bad effects on adults. For instance; women programms such as Seda Sayan, Petek Dinçöz, Esra Eron in the morning and this prevents them from their houseworks, caring with their children, carring out their responsibilities etc. Namely, they spend their time in vain. Also, they watch romantic series and some of women begin to act as the actresses. This is bad for their family structure. Moreover, when they watch romantic films, series, they cry and make themselves sad in vain.
As a result, TV has a lot of bad results for both children and adults. I do not understand that although people know TV has no good for them, they go on watching TV and spend their valuable time sitting opposite it. When we have chance to make use of our time, we shouldn't throw it away and we should know its value.
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It is a well-organized essay. Everything is clear. nice job :)
YanıtlaSilyour thesis statement and conclusion part are clear and I like it very much.
YanıtlaSilhi Begüm I agree with your conclusion. You stated effects on children and adults vey well. And we can easily understand your side both from your inroduction and conclusion part. However your thesis stament is not clear, you haven't mentioned the topics of your body paragraphs in your thesis statement or another possibility I couldn't understand. Anyway I liked it:)
YanıtlaSilAfter I posted my comment I realized the other comments. Now I am totally sure that I don't know what thesis statement is. You can ignore my comment:)
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